100 word challenge - It looked like a glass of water.

The moonlight shone dimly into the alleyway.
The night was silent and the air crisp. I nervously walked down the dark alleyway. Waiting, hoping. A shadow falls across the ground and a figure steps out of the shadows.
“Do you have the money.” I nod and silently hand over the pile of bills in my hand.
Then without a word it's done.

The next day I’m sitting in my chair at the annual who will it be meeting. I glance knowing I made
the deal with the right person. We all stand for the toast everybody waiting for the single king Fraser
to take
his first sip. He raises the goblet to his lips and takes a sip
then all of a sudden he falls to the floor and is dead.
I look around and see a flash of blonde hair.
I silently thank Yvette.
"How", everyone says. It looked like a glass of water, but was it...


  1. Nice story keep up the good work!

  2. Lily,
    I felt like I was in the dimly lit alley alongside the narrator. Great use of imagery. I like the way you used a combination of short and long sentences to keep the narration flowing.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

  3. What a lovely piece of writing. I think you should be an author.

  4. That is a beautiful piece of writing Lily. You should write a backstory about how I became an assassin and why you need to kill King Fraser.


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